Daniel asked the girl if she wants to go to McDonalds.
-Do you vant to go to McDonalds with me, it could be like date.
-Ok latse say six o clock, see you then.
-BEN CAN YOU COME A DOWN HERE A MINUTE!!!!!!!
-Okey, you dont need to yell. What is it?
-I am in a joke mood and I wonder if you could go to McDonalds for me whith this girl and pretend to be me?
-Dont you think she will be mad?
-PLESE!
-Oh okay.
One hour later at McDonalds.
-Hi Daniel.
-Hi.
-Lets go inside.
-I´m going to order a Big Mac, what do you want?
-I want a Mac Feast.
They started to eat.
-This whas really good. What do you think Daniel?
GLUFS!GLUFS!
-Yeah!
-You eat like pig.
RIIIIIIIIIING.
-Oh its my phone. Ben spiking.
-WHAT!!!!!BEN!! ARRRRRG!! GIVE THIS TO DAVE!
-Ah, dont slap me.
-Later.
-AAAAAAHH! Why did you slap me.
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